Fantage critique
- bearcat512, goldenkat
- Apr 14, 2016
- 4 min read

Hey guys, today we're going to "help" people with their outfits, so basically give them feedback and constructive criticism about what they're wearing and how to improve [their] outfits! YOU WILL LEARN SOMETHING FROM THIS I HOPE :3 Okay let's go.
Here's how it works: There are ten billion different styles you see every day in Downtown, am I right?! I found some outfits that had a huge variety and I got together with some friends to try and replicate the styles. Hopefully you find something below that KINDA fits your style!!
GUEST STARRING (aka Featured Fantagian) GOLDENKAT

Outfit One:
bearcat512: "This is a great outfit! Love the kitty ears!"
goldenkat: "This outfit has a lot of potential. But maybe try not to wear an MP3 player and a head accessory AND earrings. Little crowded there."

Outfits Two:
bearcat512: "No thank you."
goldenkat: "Simply NO- Sorry."
Why did we say this?
No offense, it's kind of *bland.

Outfit Three:
bearcat512: "A little douche-y for me, but overall, acceptable outfit for guys."
goldenkat: "It's a fine outfit. Except (randomly) it DOES contain some girls' items but that's okay, I guess."

Outfit Four:
bearcat512: "Nice winter theme. Except it's spring.."
goldenkat: "Maybe try to lessen the winter theme items?"

Outfit Five:
bearcat512: "I like the whole prom outfit, but not the eyes."
goldenkat: "I like the prom but it's a bit cliche."
Outfit Six:

bearcat512: "ELVIS PRESLEY IN THE MAKING!!!!"
goldenkat: "If you're trying to be Elvis, 1.) you're tryint too hard, and 2.) change the board."

Outfit Seven:
bearcat512: "Very stereotypical, okay if you want to dress the way everyone else does. I would replace the chunky earrings."
goldenkat: "Good elements but it's sort of preppy and the top looks big while the bottom is small, so it's not evenly balanced."

Outfit Eight:
bearcat512: "I have found my twin. You have my dress, hair, eyes, shoes, and moodie. Great minds think alike!!"
goldenkat: "Not to be picky, but I don't really see what you're going for in the whole."

Outfit Nine:
bearcat512: "Several changes to this: it's cute in all, but why do you need to bring a bow and arrow to a prom?? Also, lipstick isn't necessary- natural looks AND is better :3 "
goldenkat: "Change the board; with all those other hotshot items, why do you have a beginner board? I mean, it's fine, but it doesn't really complete the theme."

Outfit Ten:
bearcat512: "Nice.. eyes."
goldenkat: "In the whole, you look like a sadistic animal catcher/killer/pirate. And the outfit dosn't match, if that's what you're going for... TnT"

Outfit Eleven:
bearcat512: "Theme: Prom King rolling in on a tire?"
goldenkat: "The king's crown doesn't go with the rest of the outfit-maybe something smaller, or nothing at all."

Outfit Twelve:
bearcat512: "best outfit so far ^~^ HAHAHAH"
goldenkat: "So much to say... I can't even."

Outfit Thirteen:
bearcat512: "Take off the bunny nose and put a jacket on."
goldenkat: "No offense- you look like a girl."

Outfit Fourteen:
bearcat512: "Here's my secret agent partner in crime. But get off the skateboard pls >>"
goldenkat: "Nice tux... With blue sneakers?"

Outfit Fifteen:
bearcat512: "Did you just get fired or dumped by your girlfriend?"
goldenkat: "You look like a boy coming home from the park."

Outfit Sixteen:
bearcat512: "What is that."
*willy wonka
goldenkat: "I SINCERELY hope you're doing fashion battles."

Outfit Seventeen:
bearcat512: "EEK! THE PINK!!! I like that shirt though, was going to buy it from MyMall :3 "
goldenkat: "Very cute and perfect for spring- I like it, but it's sorta weird to have an expensive bunny nose with a Le Shop hair."
Outfit Eighteen:

bearcat512: "Hmm.. seems hipster and layered. It doesn't really appeal to me, I think, change the hair and shoes maybe.."
goldenkat: "It's sort of weird to be wearing a jacket while there's one tied around your waist. Plus it all seems like goth/rebel and I don't really like it."

Outfit Nineteen:
bearcat512: "The color coordination is nice?"
goldenkat: "What is that board..."
Outfit Twenty:

bearcat512: "MY EYES!! Sorry, but it just isn't umm.. Bow with that hair? Never. Glasses? Don't. Blue swirls? WHY. Heels with that whole outft? I'm confused."
*know when your outfit doesn't appeal to the public
goldenkat: "No elements of the outfit match, and there;s no color coordination, like, AT ALL. There are no two things even the same color."

Outfit Twenty One:
bearcat512: "Simple enough, I love the dress and the hair, but not together."
goldenkat: "It's not crowded, but too plain and maybe change the board?"

Outfit Twenty Two:
bearcat512: "A big Cody's fan?"
goldenkat: "Do you really want to be seen in public wearing that?"
Conclusion
Basically, wear what you like to wear, but try to make it appealing to the majority of people if you're trying to be liked, I guess, or noticed, at least.
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